Scary Movie
By: Bizzy Roberts
I was stuck at my house all alone. It was Halloween night, but my mom said I'm to old to go Trick- or-Treating. I really wanted to go out like the rest of my friends and try to get the most candy, but I didn't wan to disobey my mom. Instead of rebelling I decided to go on Netflix and watch a scary movie to stay in the Halloween spirit. I picked out a movie and made popcorn and just watched the movie. Halfway through the movie I heard a noise that came from inside of my house, I thought it was from my cat and went back to my movie.
About 30 minutes after I heard the noise I decided to turn off the scary movie and watch a happier movie because I was getting scared. I had been watching my second movie for about 10 minutes when I felt something wet on my neck. I touched it and when I looked at what it was, it was blood! I looked behind me and saw a monster that was too horrific to describe. The monster lunged toward me and he barley missed me! I ran up to my room and hid while I called 911 and texted my mom.
It took my mom 20 minutes to reply. The police came before she did, and they didn't see the monster. They all thought I was just doing a Halloween prank, but 30 after they left the monster showed itself again! This time the monster captured me and took me to some weird cave. I don't know if anyone has tried to look for me. The monster still scares me to this day, and I have to see him everyday. I hope someone finds me soon, but all I know is that no one has seen me for 7 years.
Hi Bizzy! You did a really good job! I liked how you left it on a cliffhanger! Something you could improve on though is putting a little more detail.
ReplyDeleteNice cliff hanger. Maybe put in more details. Good Job
ReplyDeleteGood job, maybe you could add a bit more detail next time.
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