I took off my Halloween costume, washed the paint off my face, put on my pajamas, brushed my
teeth, and went to bed. I was almost asleep when I first heard the sound: YEET THE BABY!!
As anyone would be I went to the window by my bedside with a very curious look on my face, and
saw the two Alhen children Allie and Cohen. I rolled my eyes as they yelled YEET THE BABY as
they used there new catapult to send pumpkins into their neighbors (my) yard. The third and final
time i heard them yell their special phrase I heard the heart stopping sound of glass breaking
downstairs and that is when i had it. I got my shorts and shoes on and ran outside right as the
Alhen children were running into their house to the safety of their parents, but I knew that their
parents were at a parent halloween with my parents. I started sprinting to their house and when
i got there i barged in because the two noobs had left the door i saw them run out their back door
so i started after them. I did not know where they had gone so i looked at the back yard and the
gate to the forest was open, so off into the forest i went, not knowing what was in there.
teeth, and went to bed. I was almost asleep when I first heard the sound: YEET THE BABY!!
As anyone would be I went to the window by my bedside with a very curious look on my face, and
saw the two Alhen children Allie and Cohen. I rolled my eyes as they yelled YEET THE BABY as
they used there new catapult to send pumpkins into their neighbors (my) yard. The third and final
time i heard them yell their special phrase I heard the heart stopping sound of glass breaking
downstairs and that is when i had it. I got my shorts and shoes on and ran outside right as the
Alhen children were running into their house to the safety of their parents, but I knew that their
parents were at a parent halloween with my parents. I started sprinting to their house and when
i got there i barged in because the two noobs had left the door i saw them run out their back door
so i started after them. I did not know where they had gone so i looked at the back yard and the
gate to the forest was open, so off into the forest i went, not knowing what was in there.
As i went deeper into the forest i tried to follow the trail but it was just way to dark to see about
anything. Pretty soon after found that i had no idea where is was, a chilly and wind blew in from
what seemed nowhere and i soon wished that i had grabbed a jacket or something on the way
out. I also started to rethink why i would follow the two Alhen kids out into the woods. Right then,
i heard a twig snap from where i had just came from so i said in a very frustrated voice, “Come
out right now and it'll save you from a black eye tomorrow.” no reply… i said in a louder voice,
“Come out right NOW”, As soon as i said that i faintly heard in the very far distance the two
Alhen kids yelling “yeet the baby!” i was very confused at that point. I probably would have
headed home at that time except i had no idea where i was.
anything. Pretty soon after found that i had no idea where is was, a chilly and wind blew in from
what seemed nowhere and i soon wished that i had grabbed a jacket or something on the way
out. I also started to rethink why i would follow the two Alhen kids out into the woods. Right then,
i heard a twig snap from where i had just came from so i said in a very frustrated voice, “Come
out right now and it'll save you from a black eye tomorrow.” no reply… i said in a louder voice,
“Come out right NOW”, As soon as i said that i faintly heard in the very far distance the two
Alhen kids yelling “yeet the baby!” i was very confused at that point. I probably would have
headed home at that time except i had no idea where i was.
About 2 minutes of wandering in the direction where i think the house should be, i started i hearing
a the theme song for the movie IT, i thought that the noise was just in my head but i started
listening closer and i heard that the noise was gradually rising. I knew that it was not Allie and
Cohen because i could still here them yelling their favorite phrase every time they launched a
pumpkin. I started to get worried and i could feel my heart pounding against my chest. A few
minutes passed the theme song was the only thing i could here, it was so loud it seemed that
there was a speaker pressed against my ears full blast. I started to really get sketched out
and i was out of breath from trying to run away from the noise. I started to cry and curled up
in a ball to stay warm and to catch my breath. I looked to the stars to see if i could find my
lucky star and that is when i saw the red ballon that was flying up to the atmosphere.
a the theme song for the movie IT, i thought that the noise was just in my head but i started
listening closer and i heard that the noise was gradually rising. I knew that it was not Allie and
Cohen because i could still here them yelling their favorite phrase every time they launched a
pumpkin. I started to get worried and i could feel my heart pounding against my chest. A few
minutes passed the theme song was the only thing i could here, it was so loud it seemed that
there was a speaker pressed against my ears full blast. I started to really get sketched out
and i was out of breath from trying to run away from the noise. I started to cry and curled up
in a ball to stay warm and to catch my breath. I looked to the stars to see if i could find my
lucky star and that is when i saw the red ballon that was flying up to the atmosphere.
I was really freaked out now and i was starting to rethink my entire life, all the people that i
was mean to and everything that i was never able to do. I slapped myself thinking that this
was all a dream and i was hoping and praying that it was all a dream, but it was not and i saw
that there was a clearing up ahead and i went in the middle of it thinking that whoever was out
here with him could not creep up on him. As he made his way into the middle he saw a figure
accross the clearing, as he looked closer, he nearly fainted as he recognized the figure from
a movie he has recently watched. It was Pennywise! Pennywise started laughing his crazy
laugh and he started sprinting around the entire clearing about 5 times every 2 seconds. I knew
that i was going to die tonight so i just stood there breathless. Pretty soon Pennywise slowed
down and i knew from the movie that it was time for me to die. I just stood there still, then
when Pennywise started sprinting toward me, the unexpected happened.
was mean to and everything that i was never able to do. I slapped myself thinking that this
was all a dream and i was hoping and praying that it was all a dream, but it was not and i saw
that there was a clearing up ahead and i went in the middle of it thinking that whoever was out
here with him could not creep up on him. As he made his way into the middle he saw a figure
accross the clearing, as he looked closer, he nearly fainted as he recognized the figure from
a movie he has recently watched. It was Pennywise! Pennywise started laughing his crazy
laugh and he started sprinting around the entire clearing about 5 times every 2 seconds. I knew
that i was going to die tonight so i just stood there breathless. Pretty soon Pennywise slowed
down and i knew from the movie that it was time for me to die. I just stood there still, then
when Pennywise started sprinting toward me, the unexpected happened.
An entire pumpkin came hurling through the sky out of nowhere and landed on his head.
Instead of running i just stood there in silence, confusion, and wet pants. I looked right into
the eyes of the pumpkin and i saw that there was a fire that was starting inside, the fire was
leaking out and Pennywise starting laughing his crazy laugh again. I was done with this so i
wound up my leg and kicked Pennywise in his tiny ballz. To my surprise it did nothing, (who
knew Pennywise was a girl). Just like how the pumpkin came. A kitana came flying out of the
sky and came hurling at the head of Pennywise. But of course Pennywise just couldn't let me
live that easy. He caught the kitana mid air, and tossed to the ground. Finally i was done
being silent and scared out of my mind, i round-house kicked her in the face and as he was
flying back from the blow grabbed the kitana and did a triple front flip and drove the kitana
into the heart of Pennywise. And then i found my way home and ate candy after candy after i
slapped the Alhen kids in the face.
Instead of running i just stood there in silence, confusion, and wet pants. I looked right into
the eyes of the pumpkin and i saw that there was a fire that was starting inside, the fire was
leaking out and Pennywise starting laughing his crazy laugh again. I was done with this so i
wound up my leg and kicked Pennywise in his tiny ballz. To my surprise it did nothing, (who
knew Pennywise was a girl). Just like how the pumpkin came. A kitana came flying out of the
sky and came hurling at the head of Pennywise. But of course Pennywise just couldn't let me
live that easy. He caught the kitana mid air, and tossed to the ground. Finally i was done
being silent and scared out of my mind, i round-house kicked her in the face and as he was
flying back from the blow grabbed the kitana and did a triple front flip and drove the kitana
into the heart of Pennywise. And then i found my way home and ate candy after candy after i
slapped the Alhen kids in the face.
The End
Hahaha! I loved it! IT was super funny! (see what I did there). One thing I would change is to capitalize your I's. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteGood job! That was a very interesting story. You had really good action parts and suspense, but one thing you could work on is your grammar. Other than that good job.
ReplyDeleteThat was super funny and fun. I liked the end a lot it was unique! Next time maybe work on your spelling and like she said capitalize your I's. Great work!
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