Wednesday, October 24, 2018

I was stuck at home all by myself. It was Halloween night, but Mom had said that I was too old for trick-or-treating. So I decided to “obey” her by staying home. Or at least she thought that. My plan was perfect. My mom wouldn’t get home for another 3 hours just enuf time to get to all the main trick or treating houses. What about my dad? I grabbed a old recorder and headed for my room. I set it up in my room so when he knocked it would respond.

(10 mins later) I’M HOME! I was just starting to climb out of my window, when he knocked. (in my head) Please work Please work. “What are you doing?” asked my dad. (me) “I am just going to go to bed early” Okay, said my dad. Yes, I said in whisper as i went to move a piece of vine right in front of me. I was so distracted that I missed and fell straight to the ground. Ouch, i said I stood up and brushed myself off.

Then with my bag on my wrist I headed straight for Desert Rose, only one of the best spots to trick or treat. Then I hit two other really good spots to trick or treat. As I approached the last house in the neighborhood. I said “yes I did it I snuck out of the house and….” heard some screeching. I just thought that someone was probably coming home. Then I heard it, oh no oh no. I turn around, the first thing that I see is my mom in the driver seat of her car.  “oh,Come on!”

The End

3 comments:

  1. This is a funny story and it's my favorite. I think it was pretty good except for a few minor misspellings or missing spaces.

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  3. I love your story, The only thing I would add is a few more details.

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