Little Cottage
BY: KENNADI GATES
“Ugh. I think I've eaten too much Halloween candy”, Lily said to her mom, When she walked through kitchen door. She had gone trick-or-treating with her friends, Nate and Jacob. When they were trick-or-treating they went to all the rich neighborhoods and got king sized candy bars. Her mom said, “did you eat any peanuts?” “You know you have a peanut allergy!”mom said, “ I totally forgot mom!”I ate like 6 king sized candy bars with peanuts in them, but I did have an apple, which was a healthy choice. (Lily found out she had a peanut allergy the day before.) “Do you think I’ll be okay?” Lily asked her mom” I’m sure you’ll be fine”, Lily’s mom said.
(The next day)
Lily woke up not feeling very good. “Moooommmm!!” ,Lily said. There was no answer. Lily got up and when she got up she felt really dizzy. She was nauseous walking down the stairs. Lily’s mom was nowhere to be seen. When Lily got into the kitchen she saw a note on the fridge door. Her mom said,” Hey Lils! I ran to the pharmacy to grab a prescription for you. Love mom”. Lily hated taking pills! She went back up stairs and called her friend Nate to come over. While she was waiting for Nate, she decided to get ready for the day. When she went into her bathroom to grab a brush she looked in the mirror and….Ahhhhhh! Lily’s face had pimples all over them and had a mole on her nose. She noticed that her nose had gotten bigger since yesterday. The doorbell rang. “Crap, I totally forgot that Nate was coming over!” “He can’t see me like this!” Nate called her and Lily told him that she just barely threw up and needs to rest.
(2 Hours Later)
Lily’s mom still hasn’t came home from the pharmacy. Lily was worried so she put on her hoodie and some sweats and got on her bike. Lily made sure that she had her face covered with her hoodie. As Lily was riding to the pharmacy she noticed a path that she hadn’t seen before. Lily thought that it might be a shortcut and started following it. Lily stumbled across a little cottage. She thought it was a cute little cottage and noticed her mom’s car in front of it. Lily thought that they changed this cottage into a pharmacy since the only other pharmacy was clear across town. Lily walked inside and noticed her mom and her older sister Kenna. Lily screamed!!! They had pimples all over them and had a mole on their noses! Lily’s mom told her not to freak out and that it is normal. Everyone in town has there own thing. The Jensen’s that live across the street from us are all werewolves and the Gubler’s were vampires. We are the witches of the town. Lily thought that this was all a dream and tried waking herself up, but it was not a dream.
The End!
That was a really good story! I enjoyed reading it! I can tell that you have put effoert and time into this story. One thing I would fix would be, more detail! Other than that, I really liked it!
ReplyDeleteKennadi that was awesome! Your story is amazing and I loved every single bit of it. You could elaborate some more in the second paragraph. The ending was a surprise and made me want to read more! You did a great job.
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