Thursday, October 25, 2018

Took 2 Days...

Everybody said the old Bosworth mansion was haunted and on Halloween night exactly on midnight when the moon is full only then will you be able to find the truth about that old Bosworth mansion. Or the legend states… so when we were all living out last Halloween because apparently “ were too old “ whatever that means. So the night before Halloween we all got together and planned out the whole course to get all the rich neighborhoods and to make sure to fit in some time for our last Halloween truth or dare.  

So together we start to hit all the neighborhoods that of course had only the very finest decorations, scares, CANDY, Etc… . So neighborhood after neighborhood we all got tired after carrying our 100lb pillowcase full of only the finest candy all king size. So we start heading home with our faces filled with candy it popped into my head “ TRUTH OR DARE “ . And it just so happened that we came across the old Bosworth mansion…

Naturally all our instincts said no way Jose but we all came together and just told each other that haunted mansions weren't a thing, or so we thought. After a few round of seeing how long we could do a handstand without barfing we noticed the moon in all of its glory and heard the faint sounds of wolves in the distance. “Whos got the time” I said, nobody had a watch so I pulled out my phone and saw that it was 11:59. Before I had time to say the time it switched to 12:00 then my phone stopped working and the doors that once had multiple padlocks on it suddenly burst open…

Coming out from the door was a green ominous fog so of course i said “ dare or dare” we all looked at each other and said that it’s time that we find out the truth of this silly old apparently “ haunted” mansion. As we all entered the smog filled room all of a sudden “thud” “click” as we looked behind us with our flashlights the door had shut and had been locked. As we examine the lock it has a keyhole. So number one objective find this stupid key and get out of here ASAP.

But we were startled by the sound of very fast footprints so when we turned around we saw the message written on the wall wich we assumed was blood that said “You” with a bloody dagger directly through the letter O. Then right after that we all heard an ominous voice that said “your time starts now good luck”. So after that the grandfather clock began to tick down from 30 min to eventually N0 “with a line through the letter O” ESCAPE… We all began to start to look around and in boxes until I found a box with a padlock on it with a place for 6 different numbers right then and there we all remembered the 2 sayings N0 escape and Y0u.

So we entered the first two numbers  zero, zero and the first two slots started to glow a faint green. After that we all got a huge confidence boost and the light finally turned on well sort of. It would flicker a ton and then stop for a long time we then counted the number of times that it would flick on and we got 8 times. We then entered the number 8 and again it glowed faintly green.

We then tried 6 because it was our sixth neighborhood that we went to before we entered this life or death chamber. When we entered the number it glew a deep red and the house shook rapidly we looked at our clock and we now had only 10 minutes to complete this or we’ll get well who knows what but we didn’t want to find out. We went into the kitchen and saw a bunch of rats so we turned around and said nope. We skimmed through the 7 books and one only said 1 the whole time.
At this point we knew what to do we entered 71 and it glowed that same green. With only about 5 minutes left we all start to panic we couldn’t find any other clues.

With only 1 minute left we all start to cry. There's a one in 99 percent chance that we get the correct number. With only ten seconds left we all take a random guess of 54. We all awaited the answer and there it glows red and the lights shut off. With only 1 more flashlight we aim it towards the “you” sign and here comes out old Bosworth himself in ghost form. He starts to rush towards us swings his giant hatchet but misses and breaks the door down and right when he stepped foot outside his house he instantly got vaporized. We all run outside the house right before it all collapsed in on itself. We never did find out what happened to Mr.Bosworth but at least we are outside of the house and all in one piece.

3 comments:

  1. good story, but i think it could use a bit more punctuation because it seemed like you would be saying the whole thing in one breath.

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  2. I really liked it, but I saw some sentences where you'd be talking about one thing and then switch the subject.

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  3. Really enjoyed this, it was a good story but maybe next time you could shorten the sentences a bit, add some more punctuation and make it a bit more flowly.

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