Everybody said the old Bosworth mansion was haunted but I still thought it would be fun to peek through it on Halloween night. The scariest night in the year and somehow I ended up on the front porch with my friend, Abigail. Abigail was as nervous as me, I could tell we were both hiding the shakiness of our bones. Abigail and I just started being friends so we both weren't warmed up to each other yet. When we were at school she told me that it would fun and that we needed to figure out was wrong with this mansion on my street. Abigail and I with an Ouija Board in my hand and the pendulum in the other we walked inside. The door cracked open and it was really dark. Luckily we brought flashlights so we turned those on. There was a bunch of dolls in the living room looking at us. We both jumped. Something about those dolls gave me the heeber geebers I can't tell if it's the fact that they are looking right at me or that there are two dolls that caught my eye the minute we turned our flashlights on. The two dolls looked creepily like Abigail and I. I didn't think to much of it, I should have. We went to the kitchen and placed our candles and the Ouija Board on the floor. We started playing, I was still shaking but Abigail seemed interested so I didn't back out. We started asking the board things but no response. After 10 minutes I finally told Abigail that we should leave and that there was no point. I started walking to the door when Abigail started screaming. I turned around and there was the board moving on it's own. I ran to the door but the door closed... by itself. I tried calling my parents but there was no signal. At that point Abigail was on the floor in a ball crying. She was banging her head on the floor. She looked like a different person, like she was a doll. I tried running up the stairs to get signal to call 911.
That's all I remember of that Halloween. I woke up in a hospital bed with a cut on my head, I must have fallen but I didn't want to ask questions all I wanted to know where Abigail was. I never heard from Abigail. 15 years later and I can't remember much of her. All I remember is her convincing me to go into that mansion, that mansion everybody said that was haunted and I had a flashback of her talking to the dolls, playing with their when the EMT's were rolling me out of the house but she looked like one of them. I remember her saying good job to the dolls like she had set them up to do something. I don't think much of it though.
Great job, this was one of the scariest stories I read on the blog. I think more detail could improve your story.
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