Wednesday, September 26, 2018

Anely Ortega (comedy)          The sad reality


Expectation: waking up
Light comes through the bedroom window (the song happy by pharrell comes on) Anely jumps
out of bed,
Anely: I'm so excited for school.
Mom: Hi honey I hope you had a good sleep, I made you pancakes.


Reality: waking up
The bedroom light turns on ( the song sound of silence plays) Anely takes 10 mins to
finally wake up
Anely: i wish it was saturdaaay ugh
Anely: you don't even wake me up, You just turn on the light ugh
Mom: hurry up your going to miss the bus.


Expectation: coming home from school.  
It's a nice sunny day, just the right temperature. Anely walks up the stairs to the porch
and opens the door. Her whole family is there watching TV.
Anely: I'm hoooome
Sister: O hi Anely I bought you some chips and a hamburger because your my favorite
and i love you more than my husband obviously.
Mom: if you want you can bring your food up to your room


Reality: coming home from school
It's a hot day, Anely walks for a few minutes to get to her house from the bus stop.
She has to open the door with her own key. Anely calls her mom on her cheap phone.
Anely: Mom i'm home, Guess what
Mom: remember to lock the doors, i'll be home in a little bit, there's some macaroni you
can make yourself.
 Anely goes in her room and is on her phone until her mom comes.
Well she's on her phone for the whole day.


The end



2 comments:

  1. I like how you actually could put a visual in my head with the hot day. Something you could improve is that you could add more details to your writing.

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  2. Hey Anely! I liked the way you did exceptions vs. reality! Maybe next time you could add a little more detail to your paragraphs.

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