A Boring Day of My Everyday Life
Written By Joseph T.
Scene #1
Setting: House
Time: 6:30 a.m. Friday
Alarm Rings Beep, beep, beep.
Joseph (action): I wake up, scan my room and put on my glasses.
Moans and trudges slowly to the bathroom.
Brushes teeth, eats breakfast, the goes to school.
Scene #2
Setting: Lava Ridge Intermediate
Time: 6:45 a.m. Friday
School bell rings
Joseph (thoughts): I go to advisory and plop down on my chair.
Joseph (thoughts): I then doodle (blah, blah, blah in the background)
6 hours later...
Scene #3
Setting: House
Time: 2:30 p.m. Friday
Joseph (thoughts): Finally, school is over. I jump on the couch and start to play Minecraft
Mom calls (pew, pew sounds in the background)
Mom: Joseph吃你的饭！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！(Translation: eat your dinner!!!!!!!!!!!!)
Joseph: I can’t get up because of Inertia, my body doesn’t want to move.
Mom: I DON’T CARE, SO EAT YOUR DINNER AND GO TO BED, RIGHT NOW.
Joseph (actions): I grumble, eat dinner and go to bed.
Joseph (action): I wake up and realize that it was a dream and that today was a Monday.
Joseph yells: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joseph (action): I wake up again and realize that that was a dream and that today was Tuesday instead of Monday.
Joseph (thought): Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
, and why am I surrounded by rainbow chickens puking rainbows? Is this another dream?
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
, and why am I surrounded by rainbow chickens puking rainbows? Is this another dream?
The End
Credits start Rolling
Your story was very funny. It was very good because it was very relatable. What would it look like if you put the genre of the show somewhere next to the title? Keep up your good work!
ReplyDeleteThat was super awesome! i really liked how you made it very relatable and you used your native language. Great job. You mightve wanted to add a genre to your title but other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteThat was really great Joseph! I like how you bolded your words whenever someone was yelling, or speaking loudly. You might want to add a little more detail, and talk more about everything that you introduced in your writing, but besides that, I really liked your writing!
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