Genre: Realist Fiction
DING DING DING Scene One
-rolls over- UGH!! -Turns off the alarm-. Falls back asleep mom comes in Turns on the lights blink- “So bright!” “Hurry Corielle you're going to be late! Didn’t your alarm go off?” -no answer then mumbles- Camera fades into breakfast in the bathroom while doing hair. “Mom, (mouth full of food) you do know school starts at 7:45 and it is only 7 I could be in the kitchen eating breakfast like a regular person?” Mom looks at the clock “Yes honey I am very aware of what time it is the carpool comes at 7:15 so we need to hurry” Mom says while driving the car, “How could you make the carpool wait then I had to come out and tell them to go ahead without you?” car door closes music playing “Only one minute to get to class..” Corielle mutters
Scene Two
Lunchtime slides down onto the chair. “I told my mom I don’t like yogurt in my lunch!!” I “ I will have it!” some random kid. Everyone laughs camera fades into PE class (last period) “I love soccer but, I hate outside PE” head nodding in agreement. DING DING DING kids rush out of school running to the buses. Cameraman the buses starting. “Why don’t they have air conditioning?” Crackly speaker, “Remember to keep your feet out of the aisle!” The bus slowly comes to a stop Everyone files off the bus Corielle walks into her nice cold house.
The end
Great post Corielle! I loved how you talked about when you wake up in the morning. It was really funny! That is totally me in the mornings. I also agree with going to PE. I really hate going outside ,too. It is so hot! I really loved how you included how you felt but maybe add some audience comments in there. Keep up the good work!
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