By: Kennadi Gates
Scene 1: At Home
Kennadi: MOOOMMM!!! I don't want to go back to school!!
Mom: I can't wait till school starts because then everyone will be out of the house and I can clean without anyone messing it up.
Audience laughs!!!
Kennadi: MOOOOOMMM!!
Mom: What?!
Kennadi: What should I wear to school?
Mom: Wear your pink dress with your Salt Water sandals.
Kennadi: I'm going to wear a t-shirt and jeans.
Mom: Fine
Scene 2: First day of school
Mom: Make sure you don't miss the bus, because I can't take you to school.
Kennadi: OK!!! Bye!
Mom: Bye have a great day at school!
Kennadi gets on the bus and walks in her school.
Allie: Kennadi I haven't seen you in so long!! How was Mexico?
Kennadi: It was fine...I would rather hang out with you guys though. All we did was go to my dads meetings for his new job.
Bell Rings!!! Ding Ding Ding
Allie: Well I guess I'll talk to you later.
Kennadi walks in Mrs. Tui's classroom
Mrs. Tui: welcome class! Your homework assignment is on my blog. It is due on Friday.
Max: seriously we have a homework assignment on the first week of school. That is so not right.
Class complains!!
Mrs.Tui: Fine...You guys will have another home work assignment it is an essay about whether or not we should go to the museum or to the Veterans center.
Class Complains again!
Bell Rings
Kennadi: Finally school is out!!! That was a long six hours.
Allie: I know...Can you hangout?
Kennadi: No. I wish. I have two homework assignments in Mrs. Tui's classroom.
Kennadi gets on the bus and and goes home
Scene 3: Homework
Kennadi: Is anyone on the computer I need to do my homework?
Preslee: I'm on it right now. I have to do a wedding video for a couple.
(Preslee is a photographer and a videographer)
Kennadi: I need to do 2 essays by Friday though.
Preslee: I really don't care.
Kennadi: You are such a brat!!!
(Kennadi Storms Off)
2 hour later/5:00 p.m
Kennadi: Preslee are you off yet?!
Preslee: Ya I've been off of the computer for 45 minutes.
Kennadi: Why didn't you tell me earlier!!! I could've done it all by now!!!
Preslee: Sorry, I couldn't find you.
Kennadi's face gets really red with anger, but then calms down
Kennadi gets her homework done and goes to bed
Scene 4: School
Kennadi: Yay!! I finally got my homework done!!
Kennadi turns in her homework and got an A on it!!!
Mission Accomplished!!
Credits: By Kennadi Gates
Actors: Kennadi, Preslee, Mom, Mrs. Tui, and Allie
(Preslee is a photographer and a videographer)
Kennadi: I need to do 2 essays by Friday though.
Preslee: I really don't care.
Kennadi: You are such a brat!!!
(Kennadi Storms Off)
2 hour later/5:00 p.m
Kennadi: Preslee are you off yet?!
Preslee: Ya I've been off of the computer for 45 minutes.
Kennadi: Why didn't you tell me earlier!!! I could've done it all by now!!!
Preslee: Sorry, I couldn't find you.
Kennadi's face gets really red with anger, but then calms down
Kennadi gets her homework done and goes to bed
Scene 4: School
Kennadi: Yay!! I finally got my homework done!!
Kennadi turns in her homework and got an A on it!!!
Mission Accomplished!!
Credits: By Kennadi Gates
Actors: Kennadi, Preslee, Mom, Mrs. Tui, and Allie
I really liked how you did your post! It was really descriptive! There is only one thing you fix, just check your grammar
ReplyDeleteI really loved your post! I really liked the way you formatted it and how it was really easy to understand who was talking. I also loved how you based it on the first day of school and how the first day of school really stinks! While I was reading it I really related to your story. One thing I think you could improve on is to remember your punctuation. Great job! Keep up the good work!
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