Dear James ,
I wanted to thank you so much for what you have done throughout all my life. Although you probably
don’t remember me, I want to thank you so much for being there, for all of us. You were all I had after
Brady and Miller died, let alone Lacey had forgotten us too. You were the reason I hadn’t killed myself too,
and I know that you are still there somewhere. I’ll be strong, I won’t let them erase my memories, parts of
my life like Brady, Miller, Lacey, and you too. I won’t give up that easily and I will do whatever it takes to
bring back your memories too. It seems almost impossible, but I won’t give up. I don’t know what The
Program will do next, but I’ll keep fighting, I won’t forget you.
don’t remember me, I want to thank you so much for being there, for all of us. You were all I had after
Brady and Miller died, let alone Lacey had forgotten us too. You were the reason I hadn’t killed myself too,
and I know that you are still there somewhere. I’ll be strong, I won’t let them erase my memories, parts of
my life like Brady, Miller, Lacey, and you too. I won’t give up that easily and I will do whatever it takes to
bring back your memories too. It seems almost impossible, but I won’t give up. I don’t know what The
Program will do next, but I’ll keep fighting, I won’t forget you.
Love,
Sloane
Jazmine, this was really good I really liked how it was so personal like they actually sent that to each other. Your sentences flowed very nicely the only thing I would add is a bit of different punctuation's like exclamation marks but apart from that is was really good. :)
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