In a world where everyone loved each other as much as themselves it would
be good and bad. On the good side the people who love themselves would be
loving others it would be a good world where everyone would respect you and
also be nice and help others. On the bad side some people are not happy with
themselves and would not be very kind. Therefore the world would have its ups
and downs, but it would mostly be happy and fun.
Nice Job Tavin. I love how you looked at both sides of the equation. I think the only thing that i would change is that you would need to right a little more. Other than that, Absolutely phenomenal. Keep going!!
ReplyDeleteYour brought up a very good point with the people who aren't very happy with themselves. One thing that would have made it better would be if you wrote more. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I liked that you explained both sides of the argument. Maybe next time you could make it longer but other then that it was great.
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