What would the world be like if people loved others
like they love themselves? A world where people loved each
other would make everyone happy! Most people would
agree that knowing somebody loves you is an amazing feeling.
Loving someone else could feel just as great. If people loved
others like they love themself, everyone would be happy.
If everyone was happier, that would make the world a
better place. People would be better at working together, and
we’d all get along. If everybody loved each other, some people
who don’t really love themselves or anybody, would feel a
lot happier. Happiness makes the world a good place, and
feeling loved does too. If people loved others like they
loved themselves, the world would be amazing.
like they love themselves? A world where people loved each
other would make everyone happy! Most people would
agree that knowing somebody loves you is an amazing feeling.
Loving someone else could feel just as great. If people loved
others like they love themself, everyone would be happy.
If everyone was happier, that would make the world a
better place. People would be better at working together, and
we’d all get along. If everybody loved each other, some people
who don’t really love themselves or anybody, would feel a
lot happier. Happiness makes the world a good place, and
feeling loved does too. If people loved others like they
loved themselves, the world would be amazing.
Those are some good reasons that you used in your paragraph. One thing you could of done to make it better is to add a little more to your paragraph. Other than that it was good. (:
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