Monday, February 25, 2019
If there was a world where everyone loved other people as much as themselves, then I think that the world would be much different. Some things that probably wouldn't even be here, would be taxes and payments. I think that no one would want themselves to pay, so no one would have to. Also, everyone would all have a really nice home, for free. They would also have all of there other payments already paid. There would also never be any crime or stealing from other people. They would also feed other people and do everything for everyone, and try to make them as comfortable as possible. Life would also just be a breeze, and would be really easy. So, that is what I think that a world where everyone loved each other as much as themselves, would be like.
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Great job! It was super good. This is because of your great explaining and it was really interesting to see how the politics would be like if everyone loved other people as much as themselves. I liked how you put it in a positive way. The only thing that I would fix is maybe not to say also as much and change it to something different. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your post! Make sure you don’t say also as much.
ReplyDeleteYour writing is really good, but in the future try not to start a sentence with the word "So".
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