Love one another.
If we all loved each other like we love ourselves the world would be so much nicer. There would be no racism, no hate, no war, no enemies, and no bullying. With racism gone we can all work together in peace to find the answers to the biggest problems and questions. If war stops we would all join together as a civilization and make the impossible possible. And when there is no hate, no enemies, and no bullying we would finally achieve world peace. So if we all loved each other like we love ourselves we can make the impossible possible.
Like how you said there would be no racism and no war. I didn't think about it that way. One thing that I think you should improve on is to make this paragraph longer. This would draw more people in.
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