Dear Alyss,
Ever since the war has been going on, I haven’t seen you in what seems forever. The truth is that I truly
do miss you. Even though it has been a while since that beautiful night when we first kissed, I can still
feel how gentle and soft your lips were. As hard as it is for a Ranger to admit something like this, I
truly believe that I am in love with you. You are always so kind and so amazingly beautiful. We have
practically grown up together and I have always had a special bond with you. You have grown up so
much and have gone so far, you are definitely the cutest and smartest girl I have ever met. Right now
the thing that is driving me to wake up and fight in the war is you. I cant wait till I will be home and I can
finally see you again. Your so amazing and I love you with all my heart.
do miss you. Even though it has been a while since that beautiful night when we first kissed, I can still
feel how gentle and soft your lips were. As hard as it is for a Ranger to admit something like this, I
truly believe that I am in love with you. You are always so kind and so amazingly beautiful. We have
practically grown up together and I have always had a special bond with you. You have grown up so
much and have gone so far, you are definitely the cutest and smartest girl I have ever met. Right now
the thing that is driving me to wake up and fight in the war is you. I cant wait till I will be home and I can
finally see you again. Your so amazing and I love you with all my heart.
Love,
Will Treaty
Trevor, I am the biggest Rangers apprentice fanatic and I thinks that it´s great that you chose that. YOU ARE OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE 7TH GRADER IN THIS SCHOOL... What book are you on? I wish I had known you were doing that cause then I would´ve done Halt and pauline, or Horace and Evenlyn, or Gilan and Jenny, OR MORGARATH AND THE KING(the last one was a joke, but I would have done it)
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing Trevor! Beautiful love story, and Colton chill my dude...
ReplyDeleteGood job, Trevor! I really liked how you decided to do a fictional love letter instead of doing the other writing prompt, since your the only one so far. I don't think you need to improve on anything, so great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is really good! And I agree with Lilly, I don't think you have to improve anything. Great job!
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