LOVE
If there where a world where everyone loved other people as much as they loved
themselves it would honestly not be so different than our world. Some people love
their self way to much. These people would make the world better because they
If there where a world where everyone loved other people as much as they loved
themselves it would honestly not be so different than our world. Some people love
their self way to much. These people would make the world better because they
would give so much love to others. Their community and family will be strong with
so much love. Some people don’t love themselves at all, but if most people don't
love themselves then there would be no love in the world. This means there would
be a lot of negative talk and not a lot of love toward others. Families and communities
would fall apart since people wouldn't be very kind to each other. Nowadays people
don't love themselves as much as they should. There would be good and bad love
towards others. In conclusion, there's a good side to this and a bad side to this world.
so much love. Some people don’t love themselves at all, but if most people don't
love themselves then there would be no love in the world. This means there would
be a lot of negative talk and not a lot of love toward others. Families and communities
would fall apart since people wouldn't be very kind to each other. Nowadays people
don't love themselves as much as they should. There would be good and bad love
towards others. In conclusion, there's a good side to this and a bad side to this world.
Great read! I really liked your concluding sentence. You explained both sides of the story which really helps the reader understand your statement. The only thing I would fix is that I would make it one whole paragraph and on the 6th line you put leave instead of love.
ReplyDeleteYou did such a good job! On my device it’s running off the page, but I don’t know if it’s just mine.
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