What To Stop Doing:
Every morning, the alarm clock goes off around 6:20. My sister thinks I ignore it, but I honestly don’t hear it! She wakes up after the first beep and then turns it off, which doesn’t help. She gets up and does whatever she does in the bathroom until 6:30. At 6:30, she turns the lights on and goes downstairs. On good days, I get up, no problem, on most days I lay in bed for a little bit…
(20 minutes later…)
" IT IS 6:50 WHAT ARE YOU STILL DOING IN BED, GET A GRIP GIRL! "
I jump out of bed and look at the clock, she exaggerated its only 6:45, however I do need to get to the bus stop at 7:10. I get up, make my bed, and change my clothes. I half run half jump down the stairs and skid to a stop in the kitchen. I get my lunch out of the fridge and shove it roughly into my backpack, I then grab Michael Vey off the counter and tenderly place it in my backpack. I dash out the front door almost running into it and sprint to the bus stop, I get their just in time. I don’t eat breakfast every morning, but ya gotta do what ya gotta do, and if that means having my stomach scream at me during school then I guess that is what I will endure.
" THIS IS WHY MY NEW YEARS GOAL IS TO GET UP ON TIME! "
And maybe it I do my sister won’t scream at me like she’s a banshee, EVERY morning.
( thank you for reading…)
Very insightful- I really like your goal and I hope you follow through with it( I know I couldn't!) maybe you could add more punctuation to give it more emotion and not sound like siri, though siri is awesome.
ReplyDeleteHA HA HA, maybe you should capitalize more! :) (don't take that offensively)
ReplyDeleteHa, ha! The contrast between the lunch and Michael Vey book had me laughing! Excellent writing and I appreciate the creative way you represented what you want to do in the next year! Your big sis? A screaming banshee, I don't believe it! Lol
ReplyDeleteI'm kinda jealous that I don't have your writing ability. If I did, I might've won top three in the Rick Riordan writing thingy. Great work (and I Don't really give high praise unless I mean it).
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a lot of detail to your writing and it was a nice long paragraph. I really liked it good job! :)
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