Wednesday, January 16, 2019

What I am going to stop doing in 2019

I am going to stop spending so much time on screens. Last year, I probably spent 3 ½ hours a day on my tablet, my wii, or my family’s laptop. My family also got chromebooks for christmas which is going to make this even more of a challenge. I am going to try to spend 1 ½ hours of screens a day. Not so much that it bad for me, but not so little that it’s kind of boring. So far this year I have been doing about 2 hours a day, but I am going to gradually get down to that 1 ½ hour mark. I think I have made good progress so far and I have  found other fun things to do that don’t involve looking at a screen. Such as reading and playing lots of cool board games that my family got for christmas. This is what I am going to do this year.

5 comments:

  1. Nice job but on the 5th sentence i would switch it with it's Other than that Great job 👍

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  2. It seems like you are working hard to complete your goal! Great job!

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  3. This was a pretty good paragraph! I think we all need to do this. Something that I would change is, at the end of the paragraph, make sure that you have a comma instead of a period to make it flow better. Keep up the good work!

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  4. I really liked your paragraph and how you just fully introduced what you wanted to change, right at the beginning. One thing that you could do to make it better, is to elaborate more one what you are going to do to limit your time on screens. But other than that, that was a great paragraph!

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