I started to love writing in third grade.We were required to write and illustrate our own poetry book that year. The poem I remember most was an ode to my collection of shoes. In fourth grade, I wrote a fictional book about friends who became famous on a trip to Disneyland. To me, the thought of painting a picture in someone's mind is one of the best parts of writing. Although I love creative writing, argumentative writing is probably my favorite style. I like to look at both sides of a situation and compare the pros and cons of each. I am definitely not the best writer, but I am delighted to learn and grow as an author.
-Piper Reid
Your paragraphs are real chunky which is good because it mean you can write really good. So I can't say much that is haw good it is.
ReplyDeletesorry I mean How, not haw
ReplyDeleteWow Piper! I love this and the amazing spelling which made it more interesting! Something that I think would spice up your writing is if you add more describing words but that's it! Keep up the gooood work!
ReplyDeleteGreat job, Piper! I love how you said how you can improve on each tip. You did a great job, and I can't think of any ways you could improve it because you were so good!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate you like argumentative,
ReplyDeletepros and cons are fun!
Making time to read is a great idea,
you'll feel like number one:)