The Best Thanksgiving Food of All!
Turkey is the best food on Thanksgiving This is why!
Turkey has
been the signature food on
Thanksgiving since the start! It’s
tradition to have Turkey on Thanksgiving!
Alexander Hamilton said
“No Citizen of the U.S shall refrain from
Turkey on Thanksgiving Day.”
Not only is it important to the holiday traditions,
it tastes amazing too! When the Turkey comes out,
you can do nothing but look at it and think
about how excited you are to finally be able
to eat something good for once. When I’m at
the table and I see the Turkey come out,
I get so happy! Finally the Turkey is here,
as it gets put on the table, at the speed
of sound I get some and my taste buds
are screaming! Turkey is truly the best
food on Thanksgiving, it’s tradition
and it tastes amazing!
I like how you made it seem as if the turkey were the only thing that mattered. Some numbers and stats could improve your writing.
ReplyDeleteThe quote that you put in was great and I think it was awesome what you put in at the end.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you quoted from Alexander Hamilton. One thing that you could of done is make it a little longer. GREAT!
ReplyDeleteI thought this was really good. One thing for next time you could try doing is maybe adding just a bit more to it. Besides that, good job!
ReplyDeleteGood Job Alex! I liked how you quoted Alexander Hamilton! Something you could do to make it better is maybe put a website link on there to show us where you got all your information from.
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