Pumpkin Pie
When you think of Thanksgiving, what food do you think about? I think about pumpkin pie because it is the best thing you eat on Thanksgiving. When everyone is eating the main course, they think about how good the pumpkin pie will taste for dessert. I think the reason pumpkin pie tastes so good is because Thanksgiving is one of the only days you can eat it so it feels special. When you eat pumpkin pie it makes you feel happy and thankful for Thanksgiving and dessert. Another great reason pumpkin pie is awesome is how it can be good for you. According to google, pumpkin pie can improve your eyesight and gives you some good vitamins. So remember to eat pumpkin pie on Thanksgiving this year!
Pumpkin pie is my favorite too! One thing I would watch out for is using the same word twice in one sentence. Try to be creative in your word choice! I really liked your writing though!
ReplyDeleteThis was a really nice paragraph! Just try and not use the same word over and over. You can do this by grabbing a Thesaurus! Great job though! ~Katie Ellis
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