Mmmm, thanksgiving the time of year when you can smell lots of different things .Most importantly
the mashed potatoes that your family is making while you are sleeping. They are really delicious and
they go great with butter and gravy. They are also on the top ten list of fluento.com, and I also agree with
them because they are so warm and fluffy. It also adds a complementary taste to your mouth with some
turkey, if you eat turkey. Mashed potatoes are a great and they are also easy make. In conclusion
mashed potatoes are the best food for thanksgiving.
the mashed potatoes that your family is making while you are sleeping. They are really delicious and
they go great with butter and gravy. They are also on the top ten list of fluento.com, and I also agree with
them because they are so warm and fluffy. It also adds a complementary taste to your mouth with some
turkey, if you eat turkey. Mashed potatoes are a great and they are also easy make. In conclusion
mashed potatoes are the best food for thanksgiving.
This was a really good paragraph! I really liked how you described the potatoes! It made me want some! Just try and spice things up by adding some exclamation points here and there to make you seem not as mono-toned! ~Katie Ellis
ReplyDeleteYa, you did a really good job. Just add some more exclamation points.
ReplyDeleteThis was great writing! You had great description. Next time, maybe just make it longer.
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