Pumpkin pie Facts That will Surely Convince you that Pumpkin Pie is the best Thanksgiving Food Ever to be Invented!
Why is pumpkin pie the best food? Let me tell you! Pumpkin pie is the best food for a thanksgiving feast. What feast could possibly be complete without the extreme sensation of benevolence upon a tongue, that can only come through pumpkin pie? If any feast lacks pumpkin pie, then it simply cannot be a feast fit for anything less than a kings rotting wooden footstool. Pumpkin pie is a classic and was developed a little over 50 years after the very first thanksgiving, which was held in November of 1621. Stuffing is not as much of a classic, as it was introduced in 1972 by General foods. Pumpkin pie is so popular that new recipes are being made for different things to taste like pumpkin pie, like pumpkin pie ice cream, whipped cream, kit kats, and even protein powder! According to www.thekitchn.com "Every year, Costco makes more than six million pumpkin pies. More than 2.5 million pumpkin pies are sold at Costco in the week before Thanksgiving alone." A cup of mashed, cooked pumpkin contains 200 percent of your recommended daily intake of vitamin A. Pumpkin pie is clearly the best thanksgiving food. Even though pumpkin pie has the word pumpkin in it, does not mean it is healthy. But it is still a treat. So treat yourself to a Costco pumpkin pie this thanksgiving and enjoy your feast!
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