The best thanksgiving food at my table? That’s by far my grandma's stuffing.
It’s homemade and so good! Stuffing by itself is pretty good but my grandma's is
heavenly! Stuffing is number 2 on the list for the most popular thanksgiving dish, a
lot of people think stuffing is really delicious but my grandma's is so much better than
store bought cheap stuff. My grandma's stuffing is literally the best because it’s
homemade AND it’s made with lots of grandma love!!!
It’s homemade and so good! Stuffing by itself is pretty good but my grandma's is
heavenly! Stuffing is number 2 on the list for the most popular thanksgiving dish, a
lot of people think stuffing is really delicious but my grandma's is so much better than
store bought cheap stuff. My grandma's stuffing is literally the best because it’s
homemade AND it’s made with lots of grandma love!!!
I like your paragraph, and how you like that stuffing so much, but one thing that I think you could add to your paragraph is more evidence and statistics to really prove that it is the best.
ReplyDeleteI like your vocabulary words! Something you could have added was more details and maybe a quote. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteI like how you said "it was made with lots of grandma love"! That was really funny! One thing you could have done was to add your sources and more facts/information.
ReplyDeleteI really like your paragraph. Especially when you say it is the best stuffing, that really makes me want to know how good it is. One thing I would add is more details about the stuffing.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you added emotion to it. I could envision someone with a huge plate of stuffing cramming it into his mouth. You kept reverting your paragraph to grandma's stuffing and how it is the best, not stuffing in general.
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